Monday, September 18, 2023

Ducklings of Death

This is the third in a series that was only supposed to be two. 
These characters come from my 2nd book- which is not done being edited. Past Miriam just put "fix this" and didn't tell Future Miriam how to do that... silly Past Miriam 
There are some characters in Demons of Isabelle of Grace: Thicker Than Water that, not only would they not die, but they are demanding they are main characters in a new story. So... this is them. And since I am trying my hand at screenplays, I wrote it as a TV pilot. I think this is what they wanted all along. 
Sigh. 
You know how some things are funny to you until you have to say them out loud? Yeah... the title, Ducklings of Death, worked when it was just a title for a story that hadn't even been started beyond a couple of pages on my desktop. Same as certian names of characters. It was funny writing it. Made me giggle on multiple occassions. Not so much now. Well, that is a lie. It still makes me giggle, but for different reasons. BUT, I have committed. And it will stay. I will fight any director/producer on it. The names of charcters, not the title. PLEASE someone help me come up with something better. 
If you have made it though that rant, here is the first couple of scenes. Enjoy. 


FADE IN:

                       SCENE: INT. WAREHOUSE - NIGHT

The warehouse is dark, barely lit by street lights filtering through broken windows. Broken beams, debris on fire, and smoke fill the room.

Dark shapes are littered among the debris across the floor.

We MOVE TOWARDS the far side, dodging broken furniture and dead bodies. Some bodies, that are humanoid in shape, but not human at all, are slowly deflating/crumbling till all that is left are piles of dirt and ash.

BACKGROUND MUSIC STARTS: A soft lullaby (possibly The Piano Guys- Eye of the Tiger)

                      Ext. The Moore’s Childhood Home, Back Yard - Midmorning.

FLASHBACK

DEREK, age 6, is running around with ALEXANDER, age 10. They are both dressed up in costumes: Derek is wearing a firefighter helmet and one of his uncle’s FD t-shirts and Alexander is wearing a generic mask and cape.

UNCLE GUS, a man in his early to mid-thirties, fit and in a matching FD t-shirt, COMES INTO VIEW, chasing the kids. They run away from him, occasionally turning to “shoot” the monster chasing them.

On the porch, in the background, are MR. and MRS. MOORE, both in their forties, drinking coffee.

DEREK (V.O.)

When I was a kid I wanted to be a fireman. My uncle Gus was a firefighter. I had thought he was the coolest person ever. I had wanted to save people like him one day.

                      INT. WAREHOUSE - CONTINUIOUS

There is movement caught in the street/moonlight. We GET CLOSER.

PAN down to show two men, one lying face down on top of adult DEREK, dark haired, not really handsome, who is face up, looking dead.

                      INT. MOORE’S HOUSE, UPSTAIRS HALLWAY - EARLY MORNING

A sleepy Derek, in cute pjs, opens a door down the hallway. He comes out, carrying a stuffed animal, rubbing his eyes. As he walks down the hallway, his footsteps also slow down and he brings the teddy bear up to hug it.

Before Derek can get all the way down the hallway a DOOR BEHIND HIM OPENS and Alexander pulls Derek into his room. The door shuts quickly.

                      INT. ALEXANDER’S ROOM - EARLY MORNING

Alexander is holding one hand against Derek’s mouth while holding a finger to his own mouth.

Something outside draws their attention, causing the boys to look up/back towards the door.

Alexander pulls Derek away from the door and into the closest. They huddle down in there, with Alexander protectively covering Derek’s ears.

Another sound causes Alexander to flinch. Tears start to fall down his face.

                      INT. WAREHOUSE - CONTINUIOUS

Derek twitches, then inhales sharply, his eyes popping open.

MUSIC STOPS.

DEREK

If I had known where life would take me, and how I would be “saving people”, I would have wanted to be a plumber like my dad. Saving people is overrated.  Screw the world. I want to live.

                      SCENE: EXT. CLUB OLYMPUS - MID AFTERNOON

Across the street is Club Olympus: an old building, as such can be found in Hollywood. There is… something off about the building: it seems darker than the surrounding buildings.

There are Happy New Years signs on the street posts and the buildings surrounding the club, but nothing on the club except for a large “Closed” sign.

There are pedestrians walking by quickly: it is chilly and no one wants to dawdle. When they pass the club entrance, they seem to shiver extra hard. Some of them pull their coats closer around them.

As we watch a nondescript, slightly older model, generic sedan pulls up to a parking meter and turns off the engine.

CUT TO:

CLOSE UP on the car.

A plain sneaker/converse foot steps out of the car.

PULL BACK to see Derek step out of car, dressed in jeans and a peacoat. He quickly steps to the sidewalk. Once there he stares up at the building for a long time.

DEREK

Crap

Derek sighs. He pulls out his phone and scrolls through the numbers. He hesitates for a moment, then presses the call button.

Derek goes back to studying the building as he listens to the ring tone.

OPERATOR (O.S.)

The person you are trying to reach is not avail—

Derek ends the called, annoyed.

Derek is about to put the phone away when another person comes to mind. He is even more reluctant to call this person.

The phone rings, but he doesn’t put it to his ear. After a long time, the person on the other lines picks up.

                      SCENE: EXT. GRIFFITH OBSERVATORY - MID AFTERNOON

There are a few people, tourists mostly, walking around the observatory. We CLOSE IN on HERBERT sitting on the west wall facing the Hollywood Sign, calmly eating a bag of chips. He is a clean-cut All-American college grad student: tall, fit, nicely styled golden brown hair and nice clothes.

From his pocket comes a cheerful tune. Herbert quickly pulls out his phone. He deflates a bit when he sees DEREK on the caller ID. After a long moment of contemplation, Herbert reluctantly accepts the call.

INTERCUT PHONE CALL:

HERBERT

What can I do for you, Derek?

                      EXT. CLUB OLYMPUS - CONTINUOUS

Derek puts the phone to his ear reluctantly.

DEREK

Hey Herbert. I was wondering if you were with Iggy.

Herbert eats another chip.

DEREK

(impatiently)

Are you still there?

HERBERT

Yep.

DEREK

Look, I wouldn’t be calling you if it wasn’t important. But I need to talk to Iggy. Now, if possible.

HERBERT

Yeah. I understood what you wanted the first time. I just wasn’t sure how to tell you Izzy isn’t here.

DEREK

Then where is she?

HERBERT

I am not her social calendar.

DEREK

Who uses the phrase “social calendar”?

HERBERT

I know lots of people who do. Maybe if you hung out with more educated people, you would know people who use that phrase too.

DEREK

(reigns in anger)

Look. Do you know where Iggy is or not?

HERBERT

Since I don’t know anyone by that name, I can’t help you.

Derek takes a deep breath and tries again.

DEREK

Look, you over educated, dictionary carrying—

HERBERT

(interrupting)

I don’t know where Izzy is. She isn’t here. As in, she isn’t even in the state. She left a couple of days ago and just started driving east. I think she is in New Mexico.

DEREK

(beat. What?!)

She just packed up her life and left? Like, left left? Not coming back left?

(beat)

Is she moving back to Florida?

Herbert laughs, but not out of humor. He contemplates the contents of the chip bag.

HERBERT

She just back from being home. It didn’t go so well.

(beat)

Is there something I can help you with?

Derek looks back up at the club sign.

DEREK

Yeah. You can. Do you remember Club Olympus?

HERBERT

That was the club with the Bacchanal demon. 

DEREK

Apparently. I’ve got a case and my only lead is this club.

HERBERT

Izzy killed that demon a month ago. Right after she kicked you out of her life.

Herbert smugly eats another chip.

DEREK

Do you happen to know what happened to the survivors? Wait. Wasn’t your girlfriend one of the demon’s minions?

Herbert almost chokes on his chip.

HERBERT

Raquel. And she has been my ex-girlfriend for months now.

DEREK

(Under his breath)

Could’ve fooled me.

(Louder)

Do you have her number?

HERBERT

I have her old number. Do you want that?

Derek looks back up at the club sign.

DEREK

I think I’m going to need it. 

HERBERT

(beat)

I think I can do you one better than Raquel. Let me make some calls. Are you in LA now?

DEREK

I’m standing in front of the club.

HERBERT

Why did you wait till you were at the club before calling?

DEREK

Because I didn’t make the connection till I was standing in front of the building. I wasn’t paying attention to the name of the club that night. You and Iggy just dragged me along for the ride.

HERBERT

You volunteered because you didn’t think Izzy and I could handle it on our own. Which, we did.

DEREK

But you didn’t handle it that night, did you?

HERBERT

Let me make some calls and I will get back to you.

Herbert hangs up abruptly.

Derek stares down at his phone. He sneers at it before putting it back in his jacket pocket.

Derek stares up at the building. He shivers and adjusts his shoulders as if there is an itch between them. He surveys his surroundings.

Nothing seems out of place.

Derek warily gives up trying to figure out what is tripping his senses and goes back to his car to wait.

                      INT. DEREK’S CAR - MID AFTERNOON

Derek’s car is mostly clean. There is a pile of papers on the seat next to him as well as a bag full of junk food and snacks.

Derek sits in the driver’s seat, drumming his fingers on the steering wheel. He pulls out a folder from the papers on the seat. He opens it.

Derek mindlessly grabs a snack sized bag of chips, same brand but different flavor from Herbert’s. He opens it and munches on some ships as he reviews the file.

We LOOK OVER HIS SHOULDER. Inside, on the left is a picture of a girl, young, late teens/early twenties, smiling. She has a pretty smile and looks full of life. She is wearing a SUNFLOWER NECKLACE.

On the right side of the folder is a missing person flyer, with a different picture, but she is still wearing the sunflower necklace. We see her NAME: SUMMER LANGE. AGE: 19. MISSING SINCE NOVEMBER 14TH. 

DEREK (V.O.)

Demons are real. I had spent my late teens and early twenties hunting them down. I had walked away from the demon hunting life four years ago.

Derek finishes the chips then throws the empty bag back into the snack bag. He closes the file and throws it back onto the seat next to him.

Derek leans down/over to look at the club again through the window.

DEREK (V.O.)

Now I just ignored them. Like a sane person. But this case was looking like something from that world. 

Derek’s phone goes off. He looks at the phone. The words WONDER BREAD flashes across the screen. He puts the phone on speaker.

DEREK

Did you get ahold of Iggy?

HERBERT (O.S.)

No. But I have two survivors of the Bacchanal demon who are willing to meet with you. Can you meet us in Korea Town in an hour?

DEREK

I can try. Send me an address.

Herbert hangs up without saying goodbye.

DEREK

No goodbye? Sheesh. I honestly don’t understand what Iggy sees in you.

Derek waits to get the address. He puts it into the maps, then puts his phone in the holder so he can see where he is going. He starts the cars and starts to drive.

                      SCENE: EXT. CLUB OLYMPUS - CONTINUIOUS

As we watch the car pull away, a single pedestrian crosses into view. It is an elderly gentleman, excessively wrapped up in a long trench coat, a long fluffy scarf, and a fedora style hat pulled low so we can’t see his eyes.

ZOOM IN to see him pause in front of club.

THE DEMON adjusts his scarf and we see that his hands are strange. His skin has a pinkish tint and is scaly like a fish. His nails are thick and pointed. Not quite claws, but close enough.

We PAN UP to look at his face. He is staring up at the club. We can’t see his eyes, since the hat is shadowing his face, unnaturally.

The demon chuckles, and smiles. We can see the hint of sharper than normal teeth. He tips his hat and dips his head. He turns and continues on his way.